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Great job!
Is this a complete version or a WIP?
The character in the background may need a bit more of a cameo, maybe down to his nose because it would reduce the extreme focus on him and allow the viewer to 'see' you.
The hand holding the arm is actually a very nice focus point and the tilt of your neck adds some but not too much character to you. You don't seem scared, or pleasured, more indifferent (im not sure that you would look like that if someone was holding you like that, be it friend or foe).
Still, it is great so far, message me when its done, would love to see it! ^_^
~JM2
Is this a complete version or a WIP?
The character in the background may need a bit more of a cameo, maybe down to his nose because it would reduce the extreme focus on him and allow the viewer to 'see' you.
The hand holding the arm is actually a very nice focus point and the tilt of your neck adds some but not too much character to you. You don't seem scared, or pleasured, more indifferent (im not sure that you would look like that if someone was holding you like that, be it friend or foe).
Still, it is great so far, message me when its done, would love to see it! ^_^
~JM2